>>54613077
Good stuff. Great mix and variety. Seriously dark but psychedelic, and few nice melodies. One thing: opening track is cool, but maybe one of the more boring ones, maybe rearrange them shits.
>>54611960
Not enough nuances changing it up, or hooks, but your production definitely sounds like you're getting a firm grasp of your software.
>>54611570
I think you need to focus on your clipping. You can get that sounds in a more controlled way that doesn't cause such ear fatigue, if that druggy washed out distortion is what you're going for. Cool concept, execution needs cleaned up though.
>>54611224
Cool, cool fucking writing. Sort of reminds me of King Crimson's more relaxed pieces. Sonically, the top end could use a lot of brightening, and a little less emphasis on the mids more on the actual low end to get that full sound.
>>54610857
You're going to need a much firmer grasp of rhythm to engage in hip-hop/beatmaking at the level it seems you're trying to go for. Read up on rudiments, try to incorporate them.
>>54610573
Flat. You are flat. I know there's a stylistic intonation at work, but you have to focus on pitch when recording. Live, everything is shifting tone so much that the voice's tendency to meander is less noticeable, but in recording, it very noticeable.
>>54610446
Very cool for what you're doing, just enough going on, and ratio of noise:musicality to be very interesting. Sounds like the background of a good sci-fi film.
>>54610250
Vocals, awesome. Mixing, awesome. Harmonic content/progression, awesome. Really nothing to say other than awesome. Other tracks don't grab me as much, but I sense as this is your most recent work, it's a new artistic direction?