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Hey everyone. I'm Mike.
My soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/mike-citizen
My feedback:
>>46020369
I'm really not a fan of / am biased against the genre / musical direction you're going for, so I can't give much constructive criticism or insightful feedback.
Seems like there could be more thoughtful build in the song. You have some breakdowns where it goes to just synth/keyboard and a more minimal beat, but the dynamic fluctuations are kind of meh. If you bring it down really low on the breakdown, the reward of the pick up will be much greater.
>>46020411
Don't be so self deprecating. Buy better recording equipment, practice to tighten up the instrumentation, and take up some vocal warm ups to ease the strain. It sounds solid, and will be catchy as shit if polished up. That doesn't mean getting rid of the raw sound, just really nailing the rhythmic stuff.
There is a consistent flub in time when going back into the A section from the chorus/B section. Flipping right back into grooves like that is difficult, and doing it clean and tight is only a matter of practice. Keep it up.
>>46020428
Gah, those samples are killer as always. I got no input, just want to tell you that its good shit and you should keep it up.
>>46020496
Listened to winter tomb. The melodic lines that come in ~3:50 have a charm to them and add a sort of endearing polyrhythm. Still not a fan of noise in general, but this is as close to bearable as I've heard it. Keep it up!
>>46020525
Listening to Tuph'en up
synth stuff layered on the guitar is kind of whimsical in a nice way. Feel like there is room for growth in the guitar part, but that would mean harmonic variation or a melodic guitar part. You do a pitch shift on the guitar part near the end which is nice, but i feel it could be utilized throughout the track.
>>46020574
Listening to portrait.
Good instrumentation. Vocals are solid but feel they could be more powerful/present in the mix Some very minor pitch and timing blemishes
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 https://soundcloud.com/yahawn/
>experimental hip-hop (with elements of sludge, drone, stoner rock, proto-punk, psychedelic, doom, noise, harsh noise, electronic, ambient, industrial and bass)
>instrumentals
>ambient
>completely experimental shit
Come check this shit out thanku v Much
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