/mu/ - Music (Temp full images)

Found myself In a place of white
I’m afraid to look outside
I may have just lost my mind
Maybe you can help me find my way

But you were always too far away
I’ve learned to live with the pain
Go ahead and fly away
That’s what they all do

Bruises that blind my sight
I’m readied for any more grieves.
Watch me fall because I tried too hard.

But you were always too far away
I’ve learned to live with the pain
Go ahead and fly away
That’s what they all do

Pictures in the box inside
I remember all those times
But even now I can’t see your face

But you were always too far away
I’ve learned to live with the pain
Go ahead and fly away
That’s what they all do

>>38880198
god i hate that fucking reaction image. kill yourself.

>>38880198
>that random capitalisation
>"anyways"
Literal autism detected

He awakes to curtains stained with morning
And a mind plagued by mourning
A wish to ride away on white horses
Above his head keeps hanging.


Sounds more like poetry or something, that's the trouble with most of my lyrics.

Light of God dimming weak
Nothing’s wrong go back to sleep
Lost the will at infancy
Drown them in charity
Lend them comfort for sorrow
Enthusiasm they borrow
I can clean impurity
Wash away with kerosene

Can’t offend my modesty
Thank you for defiling me
Language pure as binary
Instruct with dishonesty
In nature there’s no tragedy
Bandage them in tapestry
Trade comfort for identity
Drown me in kerosene
Kerosene

I’ll protect you from
All the things I’ve seen
And I’ll clean your wounds
Rinse them with saline
Kerosene

>>38880231
>He awakes to curtains stained with morning
>And a mind plagued by mourning

Hiding beneath the burden,
of a new day.
Resting on my shoulders,
I shrug away the pain
I pretend that I am happy,
So maybe I can be
I listen to the world
So I can be at peace

Try to fit in, try to stick out,
I can’t find my place
Try to overcome my self-doubt
Don’t let me go to waste
Take a walk outside,
Just me and my thoughts
Take a walk outside,
And listen to the world

The sound of the wind through the leaves,
is like music to my ears.
The sound of the branches in the breeze,
eases all my fears.
The sound of laughter in the air,
brings me back in time.
The sound of your voice in my ear,
makes everything alright.

how pleb am i /mu/

Stop talking about yourself so much, holy shit. Nobody is interested in how sad you are.

I lay under the covers
Slowly fade into the atmosphere
Keep your voice down
The sound's abrasive on my fragile skin

Keep your head down
The vultures are flying low
Picking at the scraps
Tear the feelings from the flesh

Sitting
Alone, awake inside an empty room
Tell me
What are you waiting for?

Falling apart at the seams
Cradling broken, empty dreams
Alone, awake I wait here hoping


Lead the way out of here
Guide me out of my fears
Alone, awake I wait here praying

Waiting
Alone, awake inside an empty room
Give me
What I've been waiting for


more self-centered depression lyrics!

>>38880250
Need me to explain?
The character in question didn't want to wake up (hence why morning is a stain), since he's lost somebody close to him.
"Morning" plays upon "mourning".

>>38880291
It's just really clumsy sounding, dude.

Let's begin with the end, and how it got like this, scrolling through my facebook messages I found you'd gotten cold and distant, I'm trying to figure out where I made a mistake. Nothing that I can say to change the way you feel today, all I know for sure is I'm not okay, I'm not o-fucking-kay.

I'm back to being alone, back in my comfort zone, I've deleted your pictures, burned your books and sold my phone. I don't want to cut ties, you know I hate goodbyes, but you'd understand if you saw all of this through my eyes.

Now he's back again, same fucking dick he was back then, I hope he chokes (I hope you choke, you cunt, get fucked). I hope his train crashes, and leaves no survivors, and you end up knowing what I know.

You'll end up alone, out of your comfort zone, burning all your bridges, cutting ties and staying home. I don't mean to start a fight, I hope he treats you right (in all honesty, I hope that everything isn't alright).

I'm back to being alone, back in my comfort zone, I've deleted your pictures, burned your books and sold my phone. I don't want to cut ties, you know I hate goodbyes, but you'd understand if you saw all of this through my eyes. 'Cause I'm back to being alone, back in my comfort zone, I've deleted your pictures, burned your books and sold my phone. I've got nothing left to say, so I'll hide this song away, and every time you're online, just pretend that I'm okay.

Kinda emo considering I'm in a hardcore punk band, but y'know.

>>38880291
It just sounds like you're trying too hard

I wake up bathed in excrement
The vomit from my dog's dead
Has filled my anus overnight
My yeyunum tingles with anxiety
I await further intoxication
I want to post this shit on reverbnation
The chicks see my dong
And run around it all long
My masters tits are hanging
I want to suck the dry milk from his nipples
But instead they exude shit and bile
I go to the bathtub, fill it with warm water
Shit on it, piss on it and drank it all up
With some onions, man.
Yeah.

>>38880231
it's shit. don't try to find pretexts to writing better than that, you moron

>>38880202
yes, you are bad yourself.

>>38880298
>>38880315
Fair criticism.

I don't think I've got the lyric-writing process down yet, all I end up doing is noting down single lines when they occur to me and trying to slot them into songs somewhere.
Also, I'm far too happy right now.

Can any of you faggots write anything that's not about feels? You sound like a 13 year old emo kid.

This is really cheesy, but it's sort of meant to be

>If I can't be your savior
>Then please, do me a favor
>Kiss me once, and then I'll die

this is literally a spaghetti fest all of you need to just drop lyricism and play the bass or something

>>38880354
>implying music isn't expression of emotion
>implying feels aren't emotion

I'm not gonna change the way I write to please some knob on /mu/.

Anybody else ever write what they think are good lyrics, but legitimately cringe at them 5 minutes later?

I think all lyrics look more clumsy written down than actually sung to be fair, but should I scrap them in this event or keep going and see how they sound in the end product?

The thing with making yourself the main subject of your lyrics is...it's just boring, dude. I get how you maybe want to appear relatable, and writing about yourself and what makes you feel bad can be cathartic, but it just makes really uninteresting lyrics. Everyone can write about themselves, because it's easy, you know yourself better than anyone else. I can see how writing about yourself sort of "flows," but most of the time it comes off weak and really self-indulgent.

>>38880357
you are gross
dont make music

>>38880354
yeah, i know. tell them also to listen to some actual music and to compare before embarrassing themselves here

>>38880373
your emotions aren't worth listening to if they're here because YOU'RE NOT EVEN CREATIVE YOU FAGGOT

>>38880375
no you should try to fix them. use a concept, and work around it.

>>38880383
I suppose creativity is shit that doesn't mean something to the writer, then? Yeah, most of the stuff here is shit, but if it means something to the guy writing it then fair enough, in my mind.

>>38880334
god dammit

>>38880375
and if you go as far as to cringe on them, scrap them because they're not worth anyone's time. unless you pull a Black Widow.

Up and down he goes
Silent grey man

Reciting all that flows
Again and again

You saw him once
Standing on the street

He stared to dance
Broken glass under his feet

A familiar song
He moved through the crowd

He is not strong
Only nobody’s around

Unheard unseen
He stoped and looked

Right where you have been
Standing. Like a book.

He moved his lips
You were fading away

With tiny little sips
He drank your yesterday

>>38880414
>Standing. Like a book.

>>38880242
i have a confession, this is a cc song, i didn't write it.

>>38880409
well then rest well knowing your music is like a baby shitting on a paper

>>38880439
If it means something to me, I'm happy with it. No one's out to impress anyone, music isn't a competition. Grow up.

>>38880383
Eat a dick dude. I admitted it was cheesy, and never declared what I shared was golden. Also, people like you seem to forget that it can take years of writing before anyone can actually come up with anything worth a damn to share, so giving up so easily is more pathetic than anything you attempt at the beginning.

>>38880451
hahaha
im dying

>>38880466
>>38880451
Don't give a serious response to someone who is obviously dicking you.

The thing is you guys are all railing on these lyrics but if an established artist used them you wouldn't mind

>>38880483
>serious response
>>38880451
hahahahaahhaa

>>38880466
if you knew it wasnt worth sharing, then why did you?

I shall lead you, my children
Into the Promised Land
Your hands bound
And eyes lost

I shall burn your names into the bricks of the Temple
I shall rip your memories to make you fly
I shall make you forget my name
I will leave you crying in agony
You know it's all a lie
So you can reach the gates of heaven

Step by step
Bound in rusted chains
Moves the host
Of the damned

I shall burn your names into the bricks of the Temple
I shall rip your memories to make you fly
I shall make you forget my name
I will leave you crying in agony
You know it's all a lie
So you can reach the gates of heaven

You are crawling
On your blooded knees
Cross the red road and stand!
You are suffering but the worst is yet to come
There is no end

I shall burn your names into the bricks of the Temple
I shall rip your memories to make you fly
I shall make you forget my name
I will leave you crying in agony
You know it's all a lie
So you can reach the gates of heaven

There is no enemy
We shall make us one
You will damn the day you went away
From your homes

I shall burn your names into the bricks of the Temple
I shall rip your memories to make you fly
I shall make you forget my name
I will leave you crying in agony
You know it's all a lie
So you can reach the gates of heaven

Curse me
Curse me and cry out to the sky
There are no ears there
No one to see

Only me

https://soundcloud.com/boozer-3/fuck-the-system
Yo, got my grandma saying fuck the system
we guilty until were proven innocent,
protect and serve, thats absurd
they punish, enslave the children
there aint no victims, im on a mission
to save em from satan still im no christian
speaking words of wisdom, this poetry in motion
im deep like the ocean, west coastin
realest niggas almost extinct in 2011
but not quite, as long im still alive
ima fight,
Im in control, I mute them,
and what Im about to say, should elevate your mind state
in this police state you can get locked away
for a day, months or years
have niggas in fear, or brave
either way they want you in graves
so watch what you say, or better yet dont talk
keep quiet, start lyin cover your tracks
dont ever let em read your tats and watch you back
and the sky to, with cameras above you
all around you, they can quickly surround
watching your every move, they test you
before they arrest you, smelling your breath to
wanna check you, search you, for weapons
and identifacation,
tell them you have none, but the truth is you have two
the ones god gave you, left hand and right hand
the old one twos,

>>38880490
Maybe that's true for you.

>>38880490
I'm the only guy railing on these lyrics and what you say is true and isn't: for example, Frank Zappa would agree with me when i say that most lyricism is absolutely shit without a melody; although, if the lyrics of a song sound like its an emo 13 year old crying about life and trying to sound metaphorical about it in the most cringe worth way possible, then no i would not enjoy it even if it was instrumented by the philharmonic orchestra of berlin hence Dads

>>38880505
stay deluded
i hope those lyrics aren't serious because you're probably 14 with your idealism as well.

>>38880533
and dads doesnt even have very good instrumentation

>>38880547

Im actually 22. whatever

>>38880556
then you might need to be more aware of what you are for the world, and that's nothing. you're not in control, you hardly own yourself. read more.

Look at you
Walking down a path of a setting sun
Look at you
Look at all the things you’ve done
Look at you
As the world is burning behind
Don’t turn back
Run my boy
Run and hide

As the ashes
Scatter across the sky
Tell me why my boy
Tell me why
Are your eyes so fiery-white
Why so bright a light
Burning inside you
Eating away the flesh
Leaving nothing
But a broken mind
I will find you, my boy
I will find you

Wind is searing-hot
I’ve been walking so long
Time’s getting old
And crumbling to dust
I have found you my boy
At last
I have found you, my son
At last
I would carry you home
But it’s long time gone
I will keep on going and never let go
I will always
Keep on going

>>38880505
What the fuck is this shit

>>38880571


I was in jail for 3 years dude. I guarantee ive read alot more then you and your dad combined

>>38880583
elevate your mindstate

>>38880571
>>38880583
Sounds like a pretty generic police rap to me

I think you guys are falling victim to this
>>38880490

>>38880599
doesn't seem like that or maybe you're just unintelligent; also probably not as my dad has a ph.d and that falls on me so i've probably read more than you will in your life.

>>38880611
>implying i listen to generic rap
no?

>>38880575
slightly better than most here, i assume it'd be better with a melody however, as the imagery is an apocalypse of a sort and that's something SO unexploited

>>38880624
lel

okay champ

Give me any rap artist and I can find comparable lyrics to what our friend just wrote up there

>>38880656
but you're the one saying i listen to GENERIC POLICE RAP that implying you understand what GENERIC means in POLICE RAP?

i hardly listen to rap at all, too.

i'm off, this is depressing

there's a man inside my mind
who's been fighting for a while
with the child, brash and wild
who's flips the switch to make me smile
and how the gears made me lust
I felt the chill on every gust
but how the gears, plaugued with rust
and now the switch just gathers dust

I'd like to say, I'm sorry
to be the child within your eyes
but the man is at home
hiding, fighting, trying not to cry

>>38880505
damn, I wish I write like that

>>38880676
Listen, if you're gonna troll, I'll play along

But you gotta at least fucking try

I react like a scrappy cat, feeling inside rubbings---which lurk is inside the luck of fuck?
my assface is demanding quality drugs in order to file a lawsuit to the goverment

Waste every day
Of every month
Of every year

Do it on purpose
In front of your parents
You know they deserve that shit

Stop paying your taxes
And move into a bigger place
Somehow I don't know maybe sell dr-

Drugs drugs drugs
Never do them
Give them to other people
Get everyone on drugs
That way sobriety will be the norm
And it will be like you're the one
Who's really high

Just kidding horde all the drugs
To yourself bruv
You deserve that shit

Let's start a movement
Dedicated to
I'm already tired of this idea

Wouldn't it be cool if there was a drug
That made you smarter and funnier and more
attractive and
Wait a minute they have that
It's called SUICIDEEEEEEE
SUUUUUUICIDDDDDEE

I took your place in line
I said that things were fine
I had to sit to fit inside
This mouth of mine

I told the greatest lie
I told it all my life
I saw it multiply my
Chances to be satisfied

With my father's journey into
The afterlife I took him and
His bones into a black lake
And whispered secrets about
HOW MUCH I WANTED TO FUCK HIM
FUCK HIM FUCK HIM FJUCKDF

KILL PIGS KILL PIGS KILL LITERAL PIGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

>>38880930
That's fucking hilarious, but...

>That way sobriety will be the norm
>And it will be like you're the one
>Who's really high

what? If sobriety is the norm, how will being sober feel like you're high?

AYE GURL EVER BEEN TO IRELAND
CUZ WHEN I C U MY DICK IS DUBLIN
AYE GURL WANNA BE MY PROM ATE?
U WILL GET THE D, HURRY DON'T BE LATE

>>38880984
I put that in there intentionally to see if anyone was paying attention. You passed the test. Kudos to you, guy!

>>38881061
yay!

>>38881086
Let's run away together
Act in a play together
You will be my mother
And I will be me
And me and my mother and sex makes...
More sense than anything
Has ever made sense to me before
My whole life's been washed ashore
And even breathing is a chore
And every breath is such a bore
I will not take this anymore
I will take you as I've took you
So many nights before
You are my mommy
And my whore

>>38881154
>>38881154
WHORE.
MOMMY.
TSU.
NAMI.
I TAKE.
A BREAK.
FROM BENT BACK LEGS
TO PAPER ORIGAMI
I PALM YOUR FACE IN
AND FEED YOU MY SALAMI
EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME EAT ME

dont fall in love when your seventeen
it makes it harder to succeed
dont fall in love when your seventeen
when you got dreams

you were a spirit before i met you
i was a virgin before i met you
in the town that i met you

there will never be another
who will be a better lover
by the river we stay dry
by the river we stay cool
by the river we get high
by the river we stay cool; stay cool

dont have a bastard son
it makes it harder to have fun
and what you become
may not be what you've invisioned

here comes Beelzebub
here comes Beelzebub
summon him up.

>>38881214
Bind my twenty cocks together
In rubber bands and twine
Inhale heaven's heady musk:
My sweaty sausage rind

Get money get money get money
Wassup nigga? Wassup nigga? Wassup nigga?
You steal pros steal pros steal pros
User fuck user fuck nigga
Yay.! Fuck you nigga//
It's simple as that!

I'm a writer for the metal band BSOFD
here is a song I wrote - it is about the "Boat people" that are making their way to Australia.


Row your boat accross the river ov hate
ride the open seas from your burning home
try to reach a new unholy land

send the fuckers back
turn them all around
put a hole in their boats
smile and watch them drown

they come to us by sea
from broken home running in fear
they seek a safe new home

send the fuckers back
turn them all around
put a hole in their boats
smile and watch them drown


send the fuckers back
send the fuckers back
send the fuckers back

send the fuckers back
turn them all around
put a hole in their boats
smile and watch them drown

>>38881550
thats the edgiest, most political and most amazingly written song i've ever seen. anywhere i can hear it?

>>38881763
I don't think the band has put it out yet
but you can hear another one I wrote here

http://banishedsoulsovforbiddendesire.bandcamp.com/track/we-do-what-were-told

I hate you so much
You piece of shit
You're a fucking whore
I will teach you to fuck with me

Dirty
Fucking
Cunt

I want to hurt you
Because you hurt me
I'll never forgive you
I will be the end of thee

Whore
Cunt
Fucking bitch

I will kill myself
And show you
How much you ruined my life

Fuck

>>38881550
Isn't it past your bedtime, kid?

>>38881550
Isn't it past your bedtime, kid?

>>38881882
Kid? What the hell man I am a professional.
I get payed to write songs like this.
What do you do with you life? Nothing?
Sounds about right. You fat prick.

>>38881903
Lol oh wow.

>>38881867
>implying this song is really worth 50 cents

You're delusional, m8.

>>38881867
>"the most unique black metal band ever heard"

OH FUCK THIS GUY'S SERIOUS GUYS

>>38881924
Fuck you anon
Listen to my work
http://banishedsoulsovforbiddendesire.bandcamp.com/track/bang-fists-against-the-wall

What I write becomes Real music.

>>38881943
BSOFD is a serious band
They work hard to make the music they and their fans enjoy.
They have 2 albums with 2 different record labels and a 3rd on the way.

>>38881903
>I get payed to write songs

You're that bad, huh?

>inb4 well lets see some of your stuff then poopyface!!!!!

>>38881982
>make the music they and their fans enjoy.
>music they and their fans enjoy.
>they and their fans enjoy.
>their fans enjoy.
>fans
>enjoy.

what kind of shitty pleb band is this?

>>38882037
Banished Souls Ov Forbidden Desire
you faggot
they are a real band
they hired me to write some songs for them.

>>38882056
>they hired me to write some songs for them.
holy shit maximum pleb tier

>>38882012
I'm that Good you asshole.

>>38882083
what the fuck are you on about "pleb tire" what is your problem with the band I work for.

>>38882094
>I'm that Good you asshole.
top lel

>>38882131
>pleb tire
>not pleb tier

>what is your problem with the band I work for.

you motherfucker

>>38882154
At least I have a job with a steady income.
I get to see the band play live any time.
I always get a free copy ov their album before anyone can even buy it.

I bet you are just jealous ov my job

>>38882216
>At least I have a job with a steady income.

So do I.

>I get to see the band play live any time.
>I always get a free copy ov their album before anyone can even buy it.

If the band sucks, you're kind of fucked, though.

>>38880298
Haters are generally failures.
Id pick on somebody your own size
Please reflect on your behaviour
And you'll be that more wise

>>38882281
http://banishedsoulsovforbiddendesire.bandcamp.com/track/choking-on-life

How the hell can you say this song sucks and be serious about it anon
Did someone drop you on your head as a child

BSOFD has over 100 Fans
That's more than you will ever have

>>38882311
>mfw my band has way more fans than that

Fuck, we were able to gather up, basically your entire fanbase, on our first night, in a city we've never played.

every thread devolves into this one fukin guy defending his shitty banished anuses ov homo desires band
its literally always the one guy

>>38882338
that's a lie and I know

>>38882371
Sure, if that's what you want to believe.

>>38882371
100 fans is nothing special
i got to 120 with my old band and we just covered the strokes and blueboy a few times and put like 3 songs on soundcloud

>>38880198
I have tried to analyze the meaning behind this peripheral existence,
Why has my entity materialized in this axial realm?
What is this illusion adorned as consciousness?
Is the light that coincides my eyes veritably perceived
Or is this illustrious world apocryphal?

Everything you know is indefinite as the universe its self
time, space, and life are only what you comprehend
The vastness of space perplexes me for i am subsidiary to its allure

>>38882390
it's really not, we have about 3,300 and we still go out of town to places no one has heard of us

>>38882390
100+ fans for BSOFD is a mirical

I'll find myself one day, hold on
Replay that last scene, fix the wrong
How we used to share the joy of the strange

The act we're forging extends to
Nobel prize genius, suit your mood.
Psychotic dark or in between.

I wouldn't say no
Put on your face, let's go

My sense of self's a waning clue
To plans I never quite thought through
...oh, this thread derailed?

not mine but posting because i liked

when we broke up you said we should be friends
till a few weeks later you said we shouldnt talk again
then i found out you met him
while we were still going
nothing really helped much
with your history of lying
why did you tell me you were dying in 8th grade
i guess it all done now
now that i am 19

Dancing to the ancient rhythm midnight
Come with me and I
Start to create a new life
It requires another death
Seeking for a pleasure through pain
Secret pleasure I gain
Nothing sane, nothing insane
Life requires another death

You have to realize that a creation of life is a creation of death
Midnight ritual, so sensual
One-way trip to heavenly bliss
Midnight funeral, so bestial
One-way trip with my deadly kiss

Ecstatic transformation, Anti-mass annihilation
Sensual reincarnation
Life requires another death
Easy mass procreation, Imaginary expiration
Constructive incineration
It requires another death

I'm always ready to come to heaven or hell if you'd call so
I'm always ready to loose the beast that can't be my foe

Enthusiastic, you'll be the beast
Beautiful, lustful, I'll be the beast
Now I'm ready to feast
Life requires another death
Hypnotized by lust you scream
No love needed in the rite supreme
Ecstasy in this sanctuary so heavenly
Don't be afraid to destroy

>>38882295
My god that hair. Is that even possible?