https://soundcloud.com/dinosaurholocaust/youre-gonna-die
Here's some constructive criticism for you all~!
>Noisecore
>Experimental
>Drone
>>55532528
Your bass drums are overlapping, do you do this on purpose??? They all sound kind of off kilter...maybe it would be worth pushing that even further. Also,you could use a couple more samples in your mix to give your tracks a bit more meat/variety
>>55532490
Interesting that you mix regular music into your proggy, conceptual noise tracks, but both parts, the music and the droning is a bit one dimensional. There's some interesting buildups and progressions, but a lot of the actual sounds too simplistic! Put some more textures in your tracks and you're golden!
>>55532533
You're production is good but your vocals could benefit from being more confident and aggressive. Or less aggressive and less confident, either way make it hardcore, there's too much middle of the road hip hop!
>>55532930
Try throwing in a couple weirder sounds over your beats, or make your synth parts more varied. your drum programming is good, and your beat has a decent structure to it, but I feel like I've heard everything that's going on in it about 20 sec. in. You need to ad a sound or something that sticks out and makes your track a bit more distinctive, maybe even a more off key element or a high pitched frequency that adds a bit of dissonance