/mu/ - Music (Temp full images)

>>55800070
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/trapped-in-our-cell-solo-demo-very-rough

>Emo
>Slowcore
>Somebody said it sounds like TVU


I've been listening to Red House Painters lately, so I wrote this song in about half an hour. I thought I'd share the very rough demo, let me know what you think of the song structurally, vocals could be better I suppose. Should I work on a full band version?

Returning all feedback

>>55796920
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/trapped-in-our-cell-solo-demo-very-rough

>Emo
>Slowcore
>Somebody said it sounds like TVU


I've been listening to Red House Painters lately, so I wrote this song in about half an hour. I thought I'd share the very rough demo, let me know what you think of the song structurally, vocals could be better I suppose. Should I work on a full band version?

Returning all feedback

I've been listening to Red House Painters a bit lately, this is a very rough demo but let me know if I should expand with a full band version. Vocals are pretty average I'll admit, but give me some feedback!

The Pale King
>Emo
>Slowcore
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/trapped-in-our-cell-solo-demo-very-rough

>>54706766
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

Rate my new track pls

>emo
>indie
>post-hardcore

Do it.

>>54678313
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

listen to the new shit, give feedback pls

>emo
>post-hardcore
>indie
>punk

feedback will be returned

>>54500060
GIMME SOME FUCKING FEEDBACK OF THIS NEW DEMO.

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>emo
>punk
>indie
>post-hardcore

feedback will be returned yo

GIMME SOME FUCKING FEEDBACK OF THIS NEW DEMO.

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>emo
>punk
>indie
>post-hardcore

I'll bite /mu/

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/blood-of-a-convict-under-a-pale-king-demo-unfinished-no-vocals

This track isn't finished and the mix is not final, especially the intro- the guitar is a bit off. But I like some of the foundations I've got. Tell me what you think. Feedback will be returned.

>>54322966
GIVE FEEDBACK NOW, IT WILL BE RETURNED.

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/no-energynew-energy-rough-mix-demo-no-vocals

>Emo
>Punk
>Indie
>Post hardcore

GIVE FEEDBACK NOW, IT WILL BE RETURNED.

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/no-energynew-energy-rough-mix-demo-no-vocals

>Emo
>Punk
>Indie
>Post hardcore

>>54192724
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

LISTENLISTENLISTENLISTEN

>punk
>emo
>indie

>>54191504
Hey /mu/, I uploaded a track a couple of days ago and want some killer feedback, go full on Christgau on it and help me improve yeah? Feedback will be returned obviously

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Emo
>Punk
>Jimmy Eat World/Get Up Kids inspired
>Indie

>>54093475
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

YO! New track, would really appreciate feedback, will return all comments. Go full on pitchfork on it I want to improve.

>emo
>punk
>jimmy eat world/get-up kids like

>>54069741
The Pale King! Just uploaded a new demo, no vocals still but I want feedback. check it out. Will give feedback in return.

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king/no-energynew-energy-rough-mix-demo-no-vocals

>Emo Punk
>Pop punk
>Indie

>>53789702
Returning feedback as always!

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Emo
>Punk
>Hardcore

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

NEW COVER - Hope Descendents

Really want some feedback on our shit, will return it likewise. Constructive advice is preferable!

NEW COVER of Descendents - Hope

I'd really enjoy feedback, it's one of our first finished mixes so it's really integral. I'd prefer constructive critique

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

will return feedback

NEW COVER of Descendents - Hope

I'd really enjoy feedback, it's one of our first finished mixes so it's really integral. I'd prefer constructive critique

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>>53689053
yo dropped a new cover of Hope - Descendents

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Punk
>Emo
>Hardcore

I'd really love some feedback, will return it likewise.

NEW COVER: Hope - Descendents

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Punk
>Hardcore
>Indie
>Emo

>>53656785
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Emo
>Punk

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Emo
>Punk
>indie

feedback will be returned, so cough it up.

>>53550572
https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Second wave emo
>Indie
>Punk

Really would like more ears, i treat feedback very seriously. Thanks /mu/

https://soundcloud.com/the_pale_king

>Second-wave emo
>Punk
>Indie

We've got some good feedback so far, but I'd love some more ears. I treat critique very seriously, always looking to improve.