/mu/ - Music (Temp full images)

>>55530974
I enjoy this, but it could reeeally benefit from a proper recording. Your vocal performance is good, from what I can hear in this, and this recording doesn't do it justice. As far as performance goes, 7/10 would go see you live.

Anyway, this is a track I've been working on for a couple days. It's one of my final projects for my electronic music class, and I'd like some genuine feedback, so be brutally honest if you hate it.

https://clyp.it/dc2r4cfw
>electronic, ambient, chill as fuck

>>54754860
Look around on soundcloud or put a posting up at a record store, a college campus, etc, saying that you're looking for a rapper. I haven't done that personally but it seems like a good place to start.

Anyway, I made this instrumental a long-ass time ago for one of my rapper friends to write some lyrics to, and he just now got around to writing them.

https://clyp.it/0nk13cev

This is my first time working with a rapper, or even another musician for that matter. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Be brutally honest.

>>54730005
This is dark and grimey as fuck, and I'm really liking the variation. One thing I think it could really benefit from is some atmosphere or melodic elements. Not in the foreground, though, the bass is already there. It needs to be in the background, just providing something as a backdrop maybe.

I made this a long-ass time ago for a friend to write some rap lyrics to, and he just now got around to writing them. Just recorded them a couple days ago and did a quick mix.

https://clyp.it/0nk13cev

This is my first time working with a rapper (or even another musician for that matter), so any criticism is much appreciated.

>>49318811
I liked this at first but it honestly is a bit repetitive and got pretty boring pretty fast

>>49318804
Love the guitar playing on this one, could probably have a bit more control on the vocals though (not saying they're bad though) this could def benefit from a percussion track

Embed probably won't work since it's private so you'll just have to copy the URL:
https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch33_c-sketch34_a
>electronic + instruments and processed recordings

Any and all feedback appreciated