Girl could really use some eye makeup on the left coordinate, outfits are fine tho>>10323493
Love the top, I feel like the shoes don't really suit the outfit, a more matte wine shoe might have been better (like a bow heel).>>10323494
Would be cuter with a subtly printed tight, like something with sheer elements. I'm just biased against solid tights.>>10323495
I actually like how quirky oldschool vibe this is a lot, but let the coord speak for itself, you don't need the face...>>10323497
The floral headpiece doesn't really make sense with the food themed print, a red headbow would have done the job better. Why black tights?>>10323498
Really like the left coord, the one on the right needs tights... Those socks look like trouser socks at that point.>>10323502
Cute, like the accessories, don't like the crew socks but looks like they were just for inside the boot I guess?>>10323507
Needs legwear for balance, also not sure why a dusty pink rose clip? This is the dress that could use a red rose headpiece.>>10323508
Why does the skirt look so weirdly fitting/overstuffed? It's a nice set but I'm not sure about this coord. Also just hate when people use stock cosplay poses like this that don't even really look good when cosplayers do it.>>10323511
What I can see of the coord, I think I actually like, and I'm not sure if I should. Hm.>>10323516
Another coord that needed better legwear. OTK's or tights would have been nice with this.
Why do coords seem to fall apart at the legwear/shoes so often?